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Влад Кирюткин
Знаток
(288),
на голосовании
5 лет назад
Hello! Today I will tell you about the future of pocket money and how children will use it.I think my kids will need more pocket money than I do. And in order to earn this pocket money, they will certainly have to work not with their hands, but with their minds. I believe that in the future pocket money will be earned on the Internet, because for the future generation there will be great opportunities for self-development and the realization of dreams. And, of course, children will not pay in cash, and transferring money to the card. I also think that future generations will spend money wisely investing in their further development...And to summarize, I want to say that I do not see anything bad in the teenage earnings and I think it will be a great opportunity to gain new experience..
Дмитрий Приходько
Искусственный Интеллект
(130604)
ну пусть сойдет, только ты главное помни что это так же на английский похоже, как детские стишки на Шекспира или Лонгфеллоу.